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Sunday, June 12, 2005

Illusion

"Soorya, it's time for you to get up and brush". It's the same dialogue that Maaya screamed from within the kitchen to get her 5 year old up and off to school. Vinay had been a supportive husband and he had felt that it was his duty to bathe the kid and dress him up while she dutifully cooked and did her morning prayers. She thanked God for having given her a gem of a son. "Neighbors envy, owners pride" is what they say! Vinay honked the horn and announced that he was ready to leave. Maaya rushed to wave a bye to them only to see the car moving out of the gate. "How many times have I told him to tell me before he gets into the car...", she wondered. It was the usual routine again - wrapping up her prayers, cleaning, mega serials, phone conversations with club members and the other chores of a homemaker. She went into Soorya's room in search of her kid's clothes but she found them neatly stacked and in place. Smiling at the work of her husband she proceeded to make some eatables for the evening. A walk to the temple, music class and other activities were scheduled for the evening. At dinner time, Maaya was concerned whether Soorya had completed his homework and had had his dinner. Vinay answered all her questions and accompanied her to their bedroom. "Vinay, has Soorya slept? I will just wish him goodnight without disturbing him pa." Maaya rushed towards his bedroom and silence prevailed for about a minute. "Ahhhhhhhhhh" came a hysterical scream and Maaya came out clasping a doll to her chest. "Soorya...Soorya...Soorya..." Maaya sobbed and mumbled Soorya's name till Vinay embraced her. She fainted in his arms and went into a trance. Vinay sat back and shut his eyes. That fateful day still haunted him - an accident which killed their son; that which made Maaya lose her mental stability.

6 Comments:

At 1:56 AM, Blogger rajesh said...

ayyo...
ennamaa..orae tragedy..feelinx kadhayaa ezhdhara?? :(

There r brighter/happy things too happening in life..right?Pls shed some light onto them too..

Nevertheless,a good write up.
-Raapi

 
At 2:13 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Came here for the first time from Subbu's blog...and sorry to say I am very disappointed...:(...not because of ur writing style but because of the story...don't know what u wanted to point out from it...

Please do write some nice stories that fit ur blog title...

KP.
(Sorry for the brickbat on my first comment itself... couldn't help it...)

 
At 2:50 PM, Blogger DR said...

We at times realize the true value of happiness only when we experience the opposite effect. Everyone goes through ups and downs and we ought to realize how blessed we are by looking at other people's lives.
I wasn't trying to portray that life is a sob story and is miserable... on the contrary, I was wondering how blessed we are to enjoy life the way we are doing...

Sorry for all the disappointment! Watch out for a happy blog!

 
At 2:58 PM, Blogger Prabhu said...

we also ought to realise on what lil things u can pick up from others.
yup letsee how u do with a happy blog!;)
and about the blog - i liked the way ur sentences fitted in.

 
At 9:39 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

அன்புள்ள தீபா அவர்களுக்கு,

'சோக'மும் சுகம்தான் என்று தெரியாதவர்களைப் பற்றிய கவலை நமக்கெதற்கு?

யாருக்குமே வரக்கூடாத சோகம் 'புத்திர சோகம்'; படித்து முடித்தவுடன் கண்கள் கலங்கித்தான் போயின...

என்றும் அன்புடன்,
ரங்கநாதன்

 
At 11:37 AM, Blogger Maayaa said...

well said deepu
eppayume happy topic pesinaa lifela sandhoshathin arumaiyee theriyaadhu...

 

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